I'm still working on it. I got a rough draft done for the next chapter and some of the art is finished. This is a solo project right now so the updates can be sparse.
I enjoyed this Visual Novel. But maybe add a setting to the setting page to change all the fonts to a default more readable one. [It took me some time to get used to the fonts]
Hello, I come to tell you that your VN is clean, especially the beginning with this 3-headed wolf, but I have a question about the protagonist and is he also a wolf? the gender is obvious (sorry, I'm not very good at English)
Honestly this is fantastic! It's a nice smaller budget vn but with all the more heart that comes with those smaller projects. I love the hard contrast between characters and the different personality's. Can't wait to see the future of this project!
Ps: I just hope the sex is not just some one and done thing, or that it doesn't take a long time, it's a hard line to walk between only focusing on sex vs barely even touching it. I have faith that you will strut across that line with how well this is written.
Strange start, but only because it jumped right into it. Sprites are bit rough, but not important right now. Not knowing things is scary, and not getting any answers at all is frustrating, its a process that works both ways, a little give and take could work wonders. Dog has got that name for a reason huh? A mage perhaps passing by? Boy you whine too much! Oh just before that I had come to guess it, not what I was expecting but also very interesting! Though now does seem to justify the sprites. I wonder what you have in mind.
Interesting to say the very least, my first impression before playing was maybe a literal triad down the linen the nature of Trio (the character) was a twist I hadn't been considering going into this. Trio (the character) being (to avoid spoilers) what he is, is a weird mix of funny and serious for character development and I can honestly say 2 things about this demo overall.
1. Trio's species needs more showtime in games in general.
2. I honestly hope the next part has a version of dialogue in which naff say something to the effect of "you're the one that really doesn't understand" and follows this with thinking out loud something like "huh, he kind of hot."
The idea of Trio having mood whiplash from shocked, the inevitable mix of anger, shock, and fear with his secret discovered, before pure jaw dropping shock at the ambivalence at his appearance and confusion at the hot statement amuses me. Probably due to it be X3 and more cartoony in my imagination.
I enjoyed every single second I spent reading this. I love the theme you went with and I warmed up to the characters instantly. I'm glad that Trio didn't turn out to be as silent and emotionless as I expected him to be and you just nailed Naff's personality. Plus, I was expecting the reveal to be something like that and I was so hyped up for it. I'm sure the story will only get more interesting from here.
The only issue I had is with the font. Some words were unintelligible because the font was a bit too small and really hard to read. An option to change it to something easier to read would be perfect.
Overall I thoroughly enjoyed all the content this build had to offer and I'm sure that I'll enjoy the future builds too. Keep up the great work, I'll be patiently waiting for more! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
I'm playing on android, Oppo Reno 3. But I don't think the font issue is caused by the device? I meant that the text font you used was a bit hard to read. I get that you chose a fancy font possibly for immersion but it really hindered my reading, had to squint my eyes to read it sometimes.
But don't get me wrong, rest of the things were amazing! ( ˘ ³˘)♥
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from what i understand of your style, i think we all want thing to happen in the next update, especially what happened in the end of this update
I NEED TO READ IT & laugh so hard that IT will happen to me
idc if anyone calls this update short, but you know what needs to be done :))))
Heya, any updates on this project?
I'm still working on it. I got a rough draft done for the next chapter and some of the art is finished. This is a solo project right now so the updates can be sparse.
I enjoyed this Visual Novel. But maybe add a setting to the setting page to change all the fonts to a default more readable one. [It took me some time to get used to the fonts]
I'm looking into changing the dialogue font. Is this better?
Seems a bit better, but maybe for dyslexic people [Not me] But add a switch to like OpenDyslexic font?
Just found this vn and read through all of it in one sitting.
Really enjoying what you've got so far, will be looking forward for more!
*A small inconvenient event happens*
Trio: With this treasure I summon...A Bag of gold
An update = great and also I have a question (Antony) is this jjk gojo? because it's stylish otherwise it's a great reference :)
Funny you mention that, because I didn't rip-off the idea of Antony's eyes from Jujutsu Kaisen. I ripped it off from Mushishi.
So not the eyes but the blindfolds and also I noticed that her posture was too but in both cases she was still good
(PS Mushishi, I didn't know anything about it before you mentioned it :D)
great work for a solo project
Amazing game! Cant wait for the next update!
ive got to ask cause i either missed it or it was never mentioned, how old is naff?
In chapter 2 it implies that he's around 19 or so.
if you want, i can translate your game to portuguese brasilian
I would certainly be interested in that. Feel free to DM me on twitter if you want to talk more
Update?
Don't worry. The new chapter is basically done. Right now I'm combing through it for grammar and script errors .
Ok thanks
Hello, I come to tell you that your VN is clean, especially the beginning with this 3-headed wolf, but I have a question about the protagonist and is he also a wolf? the gender is obvious (sorry, I'm not very good at English)
It's okay. Naff, the protagonist, is a puny troublesome human. Thanks for the question, and hope I cleared it up.
yeap ty^^
boop
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PLS UPDATE :
No need to shout. I'm working on it. So don't worry.
ok :)
Ive enjoyed the forst two chapters, and am excited to see where this goes
Thanks
So funny and adorable I'm interested ☺️😻
CHAPTER 2?!!??!??!???!!
This story is written so well, And now IM OBSESSED
Honestly this is fantastic! It's a nice smaller budget vn but with all the more heart that comes with those smaller projects. I love the hard contrast between characters and the different personality's. Can't wait to see the future of this project!
Ps: I just hope the sex is not just some one and done thing, or that it doesn't take a long time, it's a hard line to walk between only focusing on sex vs barely even touching it. I have faith that you will strut across that line with how well this is written.
Honestly one of my fan vns. Fun writing, interesting characters and a plot that keeps you hooked. Also snoot boop
*boop*
Strange start, but only because it jumped right into it. Sprites are bit rough, but not important right now. Not knowing things is scary, and not getting any answers at all is frustrating, its a process that works both ways, a little give and take could work wonders. Dog has got that name for a reason huh? A mage perhaps passing by? Boy you whine too much! Oh just before that I had come to guess it, not what I was expecting but also very interesting! Though now does seem to justify the sprites. I wonder what you have in mind.
I'm sorry. Can you repeat the question? Please
sorry i meant when is your next update? and your novel is great.
First off, thank you. Secondly, I'd say maybe a couple months.
Thank you for your reply
Really wanna see what happens next
Interesting to say the very least, my first impression before playing was maybe a literal triad down the linen the nature of Trio (the character) was a twist I hadn't been considering going into this. Trio (the character) being (to avoid spoilers) what he is, is a weird mix of funny and serious for character development and I can honestly say 2 things about this demo overall.
1. Trio's species needs more showtime in games in general.
2. I honestly hope the next part has a version of dialogue in which naff say something to the effect of "you're the one that really doesn't understand" and follows this with thinking out loud something like "huh, he kind of hot."
The idea of Trio having mood whiplash from shocked, the inevitable mix of anger, shock, and fear with his secret discovered, before pure jaw dropping shock at the ambivalence at his appearance and confusion at the hot statement amuses me. Probably due to it be X3 and more cartoony in my imagination.
Summed up, I am looking forward to more of this.
I enjoyed every single second I spent reading this. I love the theme you went with and I warmed up to the characters instantly. I'm glad that Trio didn't turn out to be as silent and emotionless as I expected him to be and you just nailed Naff's personality. Plus, I was expecting the reveal to be something like that and I was so hyped up for it. I'm sure the story will only get more interesting from here.
The only issue I had is with the font. Some words were unintelligible because the font was a bit too small and really hard to read. An option to change it to something easier to read would be perfect.
Overall I thoroughly enjoyed all the content this build had to offer and I'm sure that I'll enjoy the future builds too. Keep up the great work, I'll be patiently waiting for more! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
Thank you for your support. What device did you use to play it? So that I can go back and fix it.
I'm playing on android, Oppo Reno 3. But I don't think the font issue is caused by the device? I meant that the text font you used was a bit hard to read. I get that you chose a fancy font possibly for immersion but it really hindered my reading, had to squint my eyes to read it sometimes.
But don't get me wrong, rest of the things were amazing! ( ˘ ³˘)♥
Okay. I'll see what I can do.
Thanks
Enjoyed what I read so far and was not expecting that ending either, definitely left me wanting more so can't wait for updates.
Very interesting start! I like the way xou've presented xour 1irst build, the story really draws xou in ^^_
Love the start, you got me hooked
MAC version?
Sorry, but currently I don't have nor know anyone with a Mac to create a Mac version.
You don’t need to have a MAC to export MAC versions in Ren’Py.
You right. I think I did it.
Thanks
Hi,
This was a very good start, the plot had me hooked and i am very curious to know what will happen could. 😆
You tell me the forecast for updates? Please!
I can't say for sure, but at minimum a couple of months.
Is that dog a wolf?
Yeah, it's supposed to be a wolf.